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?Tom, I don't love you anymore. In fact, there is a part of you that I've hated for a long time. And now that part of you I hate is all that's left. I'm leaving and I'm taking Amy. Don't say anything. There's nothing left to say." Those were the words that changed everything.?
Both my parents have been everlastingly arguing. My mum is always the one who causes fights to begin. I sometimes felt like I?m to be blamed. Having to try stopping them from these devastating fights was impossible and had been extremely difficult. Things only got worse day after day.
I remember the day they announced the divorce. I was upstairs in my room. I heard some noises, I thought it was just my mother starting another argument with my father as usual, trying to ignore them wasn?t the best way but I couldn?t cope listening to them. Then I threw my book on the carpet, slowly opened the door to the voice of my mother screaming at my father. I kept silent, I heard my father crying so much . I could tell he was heart broken and crestfallen. It was the first time I heard my dad crying that much. A spine went down my throat, took a deep breath knowing something went wrong between the two of them. I quickly ran down the stairs wondering what had happened. My dad stood against the kitchen door crying. I stood still in shock and fear, my heart skipped a beat at the sight of my father and what state he was in. Drops of tears were rolling down his cheeks.
My mum?s life has been miserable for the past couple of years due to family problems and other upsetting reasons.
My mum just couldn?t handle things at all. She was very aggressive, angry but the worst thing is she always misunderstood things. The shocking news for me was when my father told me she had announced the divorcement. He couldn?t look at my face, he put his head down. His eyes looking at the ground, while tears rolled down his cheeks which landed on the floor.
I didn?t even know everything about why they got divorced however, my mum just wouldn?t even allow me to speak to her about it. I heard most of what was said.
From what I could make out was my dad was not allowing my mom to go out with her friends to the disco because it was two in the morning. He kept saying to her in a harsh tone, "What are you, some kind of teenager?" Her tone in return was trying to remain calm but had that hint of a higher pitch, answering "I deserve to have a night out with my friends! Just because it's so late doesn't mean anything! I am an adult Tom. You can't just make me stay home all day long!"
"Then I will take you." he said sternly.
That is when the high pitched tone from mom became a yell
"SO YOU CAN SPY ON ME!? WHAT, YOU DON'T TRUST ME!? GET OVER YOURSELF Tom I'M GOING AND THAT'S THAT! AND one of her friends IS DRIVING!" It went quiet for a moment.
I was only thirteen when my mom divorced my dad, and to be honest it wasn't easy. I wasn't happy with them separating but mostly I wasn't happy because I was separating from them. well, from my dad at least, he was the only person I really loved. He always loved me and held his arm out when I needed a true friend to talk to, share my thoughts with and he would listen to everything I would say with no doubt.
My Dad is a good man, he?s kind unlike my mum. Ever since I was born he took me out, never made me feel like I was alone. He has been my super hero ever since I was born until this day. The best person I?ve ever known. He gave me everything I wanted, from freedom to love. I never had any problems with him. However, Mum was always the opposite of Dad. Mum is the prettiest lady I have ever seen. Yet, her temper is equal to her prettiness. She was almost always annoyed and would never allow me to do anything I wanted without a valued reason. My mum has dictated my life ever since I could remember. My Dad However, is different. He grants my every wish no matter how extreme they maybe. My mother hates how much my dad spoils me.
Mum was talking on the phone whilst lying down the sofa. Suddenly she decided that there's no need to stay here when nothing was holding us to. ?Mum bolted into the kitchen with a tomato-red face and began to scream in a thundering voice.?
She was on the phone a couple of seconds ago giggling! ?That?s how weird my mother can be sometimes?
"Amy pack your suitcase with everything you need were getting out of here today!" Mum screamed at me, grabbed me from the back of my ti-shirt pushed me up the stairs so I would start moving, "Shoo!" was her last word before I went to pack. I didn?t even get the chance to speak up for myself. A shiver went down my spine as I began throwing everything I could possibly think of into my suitcase.
Dad tried to speak but mum was acting like a vicious tiger. I rushed to my room quickly, whilst hearing my mum yelling at my dad in a very dangerous tone. ? I have no time to waste listening to you now just shut up and don't utter a word.? she shouted. I stood in shock and fear starring at my window blinds while drops of tears were trickling down my face.
I was paranoid, very hurt, nervous and heart sore no words could describe how I felt at the current time. I got a bad sense of taste, couldn?t figure out what it was!. I couldn?t help do anything but cry. I busted into tears, shook my head in disgrace. There was no chance for me to leave my father alone since I was the only child. ? wish I?d done something back at the time.?
I could hear my mom's slow but angry footsteps approaching. She passed by my room and gave me a look of disgust and disbelief it was so cold I thought I would freeze. It petrified me down to the bone, and I was motionless for a few seconds.?
She walked into her bedroom and slammed the door shut. The noise echoed in my ears even though I put my hands on my ears and shut my eyes very tightly to drown out the sound. I went towards my wall which was right near my room and heard crying and the banging of dressers. I knew she was packing her suitcase. The opening of the door disturbed my thoughts.
A spine went down my throat. My mom came out with puffy red eyes and make up ruined from her tears. I knew she was up to something. ?Didn't I tell you to get your stuff? What's taking so long what? do you think this is easy for me? Can't you behave for once and listen to instructions!.? She shouted.
So we moved to another city. Actually she moved, I was just dragged. Against my will of course. My mum couldn?t care less. I couldn?t even hug my dad for the last time, apparently I had no right!. She was on the phone hysterically laughing. I was disappointed. I just didn?t understand how she had the guts to act like that.
My mum drove me in her black Ferrari on my first day of school. It was like something out of the olden days or Simeo sort of vampires Laure with a gothic black and red logo to represent the school.
it sent a shiver down my spine; not such a good feeling on my first day of school. My mom and I quickly walked into the unfamiliar school and instantly found ourselves waiting in a queue outside the reception area. I stood nervously, adjusting my multicoloured tie, pondering what was to come. The snooty receptionist appeared from behind the large, oval desk and gestured for me to sit in one of the two empty seats outside the office just as I had properly fixed my tie. Suddenly my mom was gone but not before giving me a brief peck on my forehead, and there I was alone. Wishing I could be anywhere but here, I just wanted her with me even though she is more likely to embarrass me as usual.
The school crest was painted right next to the heavy black doors. It was a red and black logo, gothic-looking.
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The receptionist who spoke to my mum tapped my right shoulder gently twice. As I turned around and did a double-take I was pretty amazed. I couldn?t even blink as I was extremely shocked. Her eyes were small and looked as sweet as honey, bright brown hazel. Her skin looked soft.
starred at her from up to down she wasn?t wearing high heels she looked as if she was 5foot 6. My eyes just couldn?t stop looking at her. I spotted the silver ring she was wearing, she turned to be engaged. She walked me to my new registration class.
The dark concrete wall was stained and the ground littered with papers and chewing gum. Not exactly the most appealing school out there. In fact, I was quick to label it 'the ugliest school building in the whole WORLD'. I mean, it was even worse than my old school! I?ve always thought my old school was the ugliest looking school in the earth but I guess it Wasn?t. And trust me, that's saying something.
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