I hope you like it: All criticism welcome...
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The baby screams, on the floor he lies
Between hell and heaven, the baby cries
Next to him, fair-skinned and bold
Sits his mother, a dagger she holds
A blade she moves, across starved wrists
She draws, like a happy child, talliest and lists
She tears skin, she screams aloud
But who stands near to hear her sounds
Except he, with his mother's blood covered,
No one but he, her screams bothered,
Till her own screams no longer satisfied
She screamed and fought, to god she lied
A dagger lashed out, on an unsuspecting boy
She cuts and molds the baby toy
She faints on the bloody carpet soiil
Finally dead, after work and toil
Her baby sleeps, on her breast he lies
Till together they rise
Thank you for your help!!! <3 <3 :D :D
By the way, I'm like eleven. I've got a lot of place to grow but I really don't know how to make this poem, you know, really great and that's why I want you guys to help. Don't tell me to trash it all, please, because I'm not going to do that, but any suggestions would be nice.
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