after struggling badly with writers block, i've come up with this in the past hour. i know it's not much for an hour, but i was struggling really badly to think of a good plot. here it is..............
The pale hazy moon beamed ominously over me. The silence was deafening. I focused on the house carefully this time, and waited for my friends to arrive. There was something suspicious about this night, but I couldn't quite put my finger on it. The clouds enveloped the moon, only leaving a beam shining down onto the main road and beyond. I was in darkness.
Three figures approached me slowly, and I grinned.
?Ready?? I gave them package I had smartly designed to look like a birthday present.
?Let's go.? Charlie hugged me to disguise any irregular behaviour. We wandered down the path of the house, and instead of suspiciously looking around before we entered, we pretended to knock the door then stroll in. Alex slipped the key out of her huge plastic bag and we tumbled in.
?Ssh.? Charlie put her arm around all of us and dragged us to the kitchen.
The light was flicked on, and my eyes didn't adjust at once so I blinked a couple of times.
?Here's the thing.? Violet began. ?That cupboard,? she pointed to a large wooden door in the corner of the room. ?leads to a maze. It's not as simple as those on a children's worksheet. It's miles long. If we were get to the middle of that maze...?
?We'd get the book then, wouldn't we?? Alex beamed and walked over to the cupboard.
?Yes, we will. But we'll need lots of supplies. Alex??
Alex spilled all her bags contents onto the rotting table in the centre of the room. Tinned fruit, crisps, cooked meat, biscuits, little cakes, and loads of bottled water.
?That plus whatever's in the fridge?? She said sarcastically. She'd brought loads.
?Right. Charlie, did you bring batteries?? Violet turned to her and whipped a torch out of her bag.
?I did indeed.? Charlie nodded and opened her bag and showed us around 10 packs of unopened batteries.
?Georgia, where are the sleeping bags?? Alex asked.
?In the front room, i'll just be one second.? I stumbled into the front room and breathed deeply. Unlatching the cabinet, I ran over everything that was going to be going on. This was the most scariest moment of my life. Pulling our suitcases from underneath the sofa, I considered leaving. This was my only chance. I could easily say to my mum and dad that I'd changed my mind after wanting to go to Scotland with my friends for two weeks.
Should I go?
Should I?
?Georgia! Where are you?? Charlie was wandering around and I fell to the floor hopelessly, sending dust soaring into the air from the thick carpet. I couldn't go.
I didn't know whether I wanted to stay or go.
?Here, Charlotte.? I dragged each four cases individually to the kitchen, where the other three were talking about contacting our parents.
?We'll ring every two days. I'm not sure what the weather will be like there, so just say it's breezy every day, not cold, not hot. Warm. Humid. Whatever. Just don't blow our cover. Remember, our parents talk to each other.?
?Are we ready?? I asked, opening the cupboard. A strange smell blasted me in the face. It was awful.
?I think we are. Just the last things... first aid kit... rope...oh, have you locked the front door?? Violet glanced around then nodded at everything
?I'm not stupid.? Alex raised her nose in the air and unwound the rope. ?Let's go.?
I climbed in first, and to my huge shock, the inside of the cupboard was colossal. It smelled musty and cobwebs blanketed the ceilings.
?Yuck.? Charlie came second, then we helped lower the cases down. Violet came last, then we all tied the rope to the inside door handle so we could find our way back.
?Woo! And we're off...? I groped around for my torch and accidentally turned it on in Charlie's face.
p.s i haven't spellchecked it or anything yet but i will, so please tell me whats good, bad, and what i can improve.
thankyou.x
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