(im 13 by the way)
Jack sat there on the cold, wet grass staring up at the moon with his big blue eyes. The stars where shining brightly in the sky, covering the sky in a carpet of shining lights. Jack felt rejected, isolated, alone. He had gone to school that day to find a group of people tearing up his work papers and throwing his lunch on the floor. Oh this wasn't the worst that had happened. He had seen much worse, and heard a lot of rude insults. But he tried to see the bright side in life. He was happy with his family and enjoyed every moment with them.
'I'm sorry about earlier, Jack,' A voice inturupted his thoughts...
Jack turned suddenly. It was Emma Patrickson. Emma had liked Jack for a long time but still seemed to join in with the bullying. But the thing that had bothered Jack was...... How did she know I was here?
'I saw you walk home from school, Jack, you've been here all evening,' said Emma.
'Why dont you just patronize me like the rest of them,' Said Jack.
'I've come to say sorry.... none of that was meant to happen'
8 minutes ago - 4 days left to answer.
By the way i wasnt asking if you'd seen better i just wanted to know what you think of it and how i could improve... im only 13 you cant expect me to be THAT good! :@
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