its about some people who crash on an island, and its in first person. its only short for now, but theyve just crashed so the girl has lost all her senses, just as if you hit her head really hard and sort of black out? tell me your opinions, and HOW I CAN IMPROVE!
I felt nothing. It were as though I lay mid-air in none existent winds through the most dead night experienced on Earth, where it were so quiet, so gentle, so dark, that my senses had no use. It were so peaceful, and I were struck by wonder and concern, though I felt somewhat at comfort and ease. I didn?t feel any desire to think, or investigate my situation, for I were overwhelmed with relaxed and careless emotions. This was my reward for all those long nights of studies that piled on top of my everyday chores. Such things replayed in my mind, disturbing the peace I were thanking god for. I were in my house, clean and innocent, but small and rented. I hadn?t enough money to keep it, but I had never liked the property anyway, I lived there only for it were my standard. The memories made me want to slip back into that dead night, where darkness surrounded, and sounds were no reality. I were sick of facing and fighting the problem called life, which I faced every day. I had wanted to make a difference, in my own life and in the name of history and science. I attempted to push out the thoughts of that faded red carpet that matched perfectly with the rest of the furnished home. If it were enough to be labelled a home.
any ideas of how i can now start to get her senses back. feeling sand beneathe her. hearing people shouting, etc.
thanks! x
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